Sunday, August 9, 2009

सवंरिया बादल बन के आ

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बादल बन के आ सवंरिया, बादल बन के आ.
बादल क घोड़वा, बदले का दुलहा.
बरसा द पनिया का फुलवा, सवंरिया बादल बन के आ.

तोरी कनिया पियासल बैठल है.
सावन महिना तोहरे बिन तरसल है.
कईसे जिहें तोहार पुतवा, सवंरिया बादल बन के आ.

सावन महिना बीत गईल, जोहत जोहत बाट.
अब कबले अईब तू सजना, जब उठ जई हमार खाट.

सवंरिया बादल बन के आ.
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16 comments:

  1. kgandharvaSunday, August 9, 2009 at 11:32:00 PM GMT+5:30

    dulhaniya ki badi hi phikr hai aapko bipin jee........le aaeeye apni bhi dulhaniya

    Waise kavi ki dhar nikhar rehi hai

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  2. NaveenSunday, August 9, 2009 at 11:40:00 PM GMT+5:30

    bahut hi pyaari kavita hai..

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  3. vikashSunday, August 9, 2009 at 11:48:00 PM GMT+5:30

    bahut hi badhiya ......:)

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  4. Kumar GaurawSunday, August 9, 2009 at 11:58:00 PM GMT+5:30

    Awesome! Bahoot Khoob :-)

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  5. UnknownMonday, August 10, 2009 at 8:26:00 AM GMT+5:30

    Mast hai, Bole to Kool like BADAL..

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  6. AnonymousMonday, August 10, 2009 at 3:27:00 PM GMT+5:30

    nice one buddy . birah agni se vyakul bipin bhai ne kuch gajab ki shayari likhi hai

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  7. AnonymousMonday, August 10, 2009 at 6:31:00 PM GMT+5:30

    cha gaye ho guru..ab ek collection bana ke book nikalwa hi do :) ---Ashish

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  8. NitinMonday, August 10, 2009 at 7:56:00 PM GMT+5:30

    aapki dulhaniya to pure frustrate ho gayi.........
    सावन महिना बीत गईल, जोहत जोहत बाट.
    अब कबले अईब तू सजना, जब उठ जई हमार खाट.
    kuchh kijiye maharaj.........

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  9. AnonymousTuesday, August 11, 2009 at 11:27:00 AM GMT+5:30

    cloud cloud everywhere
    not a drop of water

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  10. Bipin PandeyTuesday, August 11, 2009 at 8:48:00 PM GMT+5:30

    गन्धर्व, नविन, विकाश, कुमार गौरव भैया, प्रभात, आशीष, नितिन और सभी लोगों को उत्साहवर्धन के लिए हार्दिक धन्यवाद्.
    आपलोगों से share करना चाहूँगा कि भोजपुरी में ये मेरा पहला प्रयास है.
    धन्यवाद्.

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  11. Sandeep ChauhanWednesday, August 12, 2009 at 1:15:00 AM GMT+5:30

    apne dohre drishtikaun ko bahut hi umda tareeke se prastut kiya hai bipin bhai aapne. aapki kavita ke bahane hum bhi kuch bhojpuri sikh rahe hain :)

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  12. PrabhakarThursday, August 13, 2009 at 11:16:00 AM GMT+5:30

    bhrata bahut khoob likhe hai..
    waise kinke virah mein likhe hai, jara ispe bhi prakash daaliye

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  13. Bipin PandeyWednesday, August 19, 2009 at 3:08:00 AM GMT+5:30

    Thanks Sandeep and Prabhakar (Babuwa)

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  14. KalpanaWednesday, August 26, 2009 at 2:24:00 PM GMT+5:30

    Bahut achha likhe hain...I really enjoy and admire you for all your poems but this one is really amazing as it reminds me of my village where I have seen wives waiting like this for their husbands who went to earn money in cities..bahut sundar dhang se aapne larki ke man ke bhaw ko kavita ke roop me chitreet kiya hai..keep it up.

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  15. Ganesh MajjiWednesday, August 26, 2009 at 2:34:00 PM GMT+5:30

    "तोरी कनिया पियासल बैठल है"
    - batao bhai kahan baithal hai?.. hum bhuja denge uski piyas :P

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  16. Bipin PandeyFriday, December 25, 2009 at 1:32:00 PM GMT+5:30

    Thanks Kalpana ji and Ganesh :)

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