Monday, May 3, 2010

एक अच्छी तराजू तो देना था न पापा





ग्राहक बदल गए, सामान बदल गए,
दूकान भले हीं पुरानी सौंप दी, लेकिन
एक अच्छी तराजू तो देना था न पापा!

कुछ सामान तो तराजू में आते ही नहीं,
कुछ आ भी गए तो इतने भारी,
कि अगर उसके भार का बटखरा रख दूँ ,
तो ये तराजू भी टूट जाए.

नए तो दूर, अब पुराने ग्राहक भी नहीं आते,
जो एक दो आ गए, उनको बिन तौले हीं
मुफ्त में बाटने पड़े सारे सामान.
बच गया मै और आपकी ये दुकान.
और हाँ, ये बिच में लटकती तराजू.

18 comments:

  1. very nice ....tarazoo ko badalna apko tha ...sab papa hi karenge kya.....:)

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  2. Excellent Post, reminds me the days of my village, RAMU kaka Shop and His weak Taraju. :)

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  3. Mast hai Vidu Lage Raho .....
    this deep thought can understand by few people .....

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  4. 1 to grahak aate nahin
    uspar se taraju tutne ka nakhra
    1 hin baar 1 qntl taulen kaun kehta hai?

    pehle customer dhoondie tab quantity ki baat aati hai.

    waise kavita bahut achhi hai

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  5. Thanks Mayuri ji, Prabhat, Vijay, Rajesh and Rohit :)

    @Mayuri ji - han wahi chuk ho gayi.
    @Prabhat - meri kavita aapko aapke gaon ki yaad dila di, ye mere liye badi khushi ki baat hai.
    @Vijay - sure man.
    @Raj - bus aapki kripa hai prabhu.
    @Rohit - sahi bhatije :)

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  6. Bahut khoob! Enjoy reading your posts. Good thought, awesome writing...beautiful!

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  7. bahut hi umda tola hai aapne aadmi ke bhaav ko :)

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  8. bhai main to itna soch bhi nai sakta.. thoda gyan idhar bhi baatiye.. bahut hi ache tarike se manobhaw ko pesh kiya hai aapne.. likhte rahiye

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  9. thanks prabhakar bhai, ye to apka badappan hai.

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  10. Man, It seems u have nice memory of ur past days. Keep it up. expecting much more.

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