ग्राहक बदल गए, सामान बदल गए,
दूकान भले हीं पुरानी सौंप दी, लेकिन
एक अच्छी तराजू तो देना था न पापा!
कुछ सामान तो तराजू में आते ही नहीं,
कुछ आ भी गए तो इतने भारी,
कि अगर उसके भार का बटखरा रख दूँ ,
तो ये तराजू भी टूट जाए.
नए तो दूर, अब पुराने ग्राहक भी नहीं आते,
जो एक दो आ गए, उनको बिन तौले हीं
मुफ्त में बाटने पड़े सारे सामान.
बच गया मै और आपकी ये दुकान.
और हाँ, ये बिच में लटकती तराजू.
very nice ....tarazoo ko badalna apko tha ...sab papa hi karenge kya.....:)
ReplyDeleteExcellent Post, reminds me the days of my village, RAMU kaka Shop and His weak Taraju. :)
ReplyDeletevery poignant theme . continue writing
ReplyDeleteKya baat hain bhai :)
ReplyDeletewah kya baat hai, chachha!!!!
ReplyDeleteMast hai Vidu Lage Raho .....
ReplyDeletethis deep thought can understand by few people .....
1 to grahak aate nahin
ReplyDeleteuspar se taraju tutne ka nakhra
1 hin baar 1 qntl taulen kaun kehta hai?
pehle customer dhoondie tab quantity ki baat aati hai.
waise kavita bahut achhi hai
Thanks Mayuri ji, Prabhat, Vijay, Rajesh and Rohit :)
ReplyDelete@Mayuri ji - han wahi chuk ho gayi.
@Prabhat - meri kavita aapko aapke gaon ki yaad dila di, ye mere liye badi khushi ki baat hai.
@Vijay - sure man.
@Raj - bus aapki kripa hai prabhu.
@Rohit - sahi bhatije :)
Thanks Vishal Bhaiya aur Shambhu bhai..
ReplyDeletevery correctly said.....keep writting....
ReplyDeleteBahut khoob! Enjoy reading your posts. Good thought, awesome writing...beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nitya and Gaurav bhaiya :)
ReplyDeletebahut hi umda tola hai aapne aadmi ke bhaav ko :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sandy...
ReplyDeletebhai main to itna soch bhi nai sakta.. thoda gyan idhar bhi baatiye.. bahut hi ache tarike se manobhaw ko pesh kiya hai aapne.. likhte rahiye
ReplyDeletethanks prabhakar bhai, ye to apka badappan hai.
ReplyDeleteMan, It seems u have nice memory of ur past days. Keep it up. expecting much more.
ReplyDeletethank you sir :)
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